Debating Black Books
As has been seen over the last couple of months, it is very difficult to engage in a decent debate about differences between highbrow and lowbrow writing, or writing quality at all. Part of this, I have begun to believe, is that many people have not been properly educated in critical thinking, reading, or rhetoric. Many have no real understanding of logic, or that good debate depends on the participants responding to each other's actual points, not to vague concepts of each other’s platforms.Perhaps most telling, there are many people involved in this debate who clearly don’t know how to read. They skim, gobble down the text and get a basic idea about what something says, but it’s clear that they don’t swallow each sentence one at a time, digesting each careful so as to understand exactly what it is being said. It’s no wonder they see little difference between a poorly constructed manuscript and an expertly crafted one. Unfortunately, this is also what hinders the quality of this debate significantly.
Here are examples of common rhetorical disconnects I have come across in the last three months of this debate.
Money Mania
Criticism: Beginning writers who spend too much time focused on the business of selling books often lose sight of the art, and as a result become unskilled writers.Bizarrely, this response has absolutely nothing to do with the original criticism. In fact, the two statements don’t even contradict each other. This, I would think, is obvious, but the fact that this logical error was repeated by several of the commercial fiction proponents has led me to examine this disconnect.
Response: Yes you can have a successful business selling your own books.
Here is my theory: the reason this misunderstanding happens is that commercial writers see writing almost entirely through the lens of business, so much so that the words used to describe writing take on a different meaning. Selling books is the commercial writer’s primary goal, therefore an “unskilled writer” is a writer who doesn’t sell books. So when they read the above critical prompt, what they see in their heads is:
Beginning writers who spend too much time focused on the business of selling books often lose sight of the art, and as a result become business failures.That then is the sentence that they respond to, unaware that their most basic perception has been warped by their entrepreneurial fixation.
Candy is Good for You!
Criticism: While candy might be yummy, it is not nutritious and should not be represented as a meal.This is a classic disconnect, one shared across the board. Notice that the criticism makes no statement about the worth of candy, just the nutritious value (which of course is nonexistent). It does not say that candy is not yummy. It does not say that candy has no value, or a place in this world. But in an community unused to criticism, any critique is considered the equivalent of a dismissal.
Response: How dare you say my candy isn’t delicious!
Lester Spence has an interesting take on this debate between highbrow and lowbrow art, showing a clip of the battle waging at the National Black Theater Festival, a bi-annual event that highlights the most promising plays in black theater. The controversy swarms around the fact that Tyler Perry, the most commercially successful black figure in theater in generations, has never been invited to this prestigious event.
In my opinion, Tyler Perry is very good at what he does, I would argue even brilliant at it. His work is at times hilarious, surprisingly insightful and creative. And for this, Perry should be highly praised. That said, I don’t think he should be invited to the National Black Theater Festival, which is a highbrow event for more sophisticated theater.
Tyler Perry’s plays are often smart for what they are, but what they are is vaudeville. Their goal is not to innovate in the art form, but to utilize existing story structures to give people something familiar. Their intention is not to go for depth and layered meaning, but to explore the surface. Perry’s plays are not about challenging people to think about the world in new ways, but instead to give them a break so that they can laugh at the world we live in. There is real worth in a good lowbrow vaudevillian play such as the kind that Tyler Perry creates. But that does not mean it is the same degree of worth found in a play that challenges the medium and our very notion of reality, such as the kind of plays once created by August Wilson. However, this world should be big enough for both those visions to exist.
Poopy Throwing Time
Criticism: I believe that good writing should be nuanced, original, and transcendent.The problem with arguing with the unenlightened is that their first inclination is to respond by flinging the feces scooped from the bottom of their intellectual cages. (Now that’s an insult for you!) Seriously though, this has been a sad re-occurrence in the debate over the last few months. It happens for a lot of reasons: those unused to critical dialogue see criticism as an attack, those just trying to make money are confused with concerns about quality from others whose primary concern is the state of the art form, and there are those who just think that name calling is how you argue. The latter do not always use crass curses, rather instead making personal accusations against the critic's motives (that they seek only to aggrandize themselves, that their criticism indicates insecurity, that they are hateful people, etc.).
Response: I believe that you are an asshole.
The reason this is so detrimental, besides just petty, is that once this happens the debate is over. There is nowhere to go from there, no chance for either side to argue their point. Everything instantly degrades into mudslinging. (Or poop slinging, as the case may be).
For good example, look at the end of the National Black Theater Festival piece, and see the reaction of Malik Yoba to Tyler Perry's omission from the event. He responds in a style more apt to professional wrestling than artistic debate, turning to the camera to stare it down with a melodramatic, theatrical threat. It's hilarious. How does this guy not have a show anymore?
Directions vs. Dictates
Criticism: If you would like to go North, take the road to the left. If you would like to go to the South, take the road to the right.Besides the obnoxious and inflammatory intro I used for my self-publishing critique (which shockingly nobody attacked directly, except me just now), the critique itself is rather tame, I think. It doesn’t tell people they should be a commercial writer or a literary one, it just says that the self-publishing route is a potential dead end for those who want to write sophisticated fiction. To my mind, it is a simple statement of facts about how I arrived where I am as a writer, and how others have ended up with the careers that they have. It is not an order for all else to do the same as I did, whether that's getting an MFA or even writing lit fiction. But again, the response logic of some of the would-be critics got caught up in the absolutes of its own invention.
Response: How dare you tell everyone they have to go North? Everybody doesn’t have to go North, that’s just stupid.
Why I'm Bothering
Another thing that has come up repeatedly, from emails and other responses, is why I’m even bothering to trying to have a critical dialogue at all. For those that wonder, here is a list of my intentions for this dialogue:
1. To create an understanding of the difference between highbrow and lowbrow art in the African American community, and for an intellectual space for both of them so that they might better co-exist.Now, dear reader, it's time to test your critical thinking skills. Which of the above statements is false?
2. To make aspiring literary writers aware of the pitfalls between them and their goals.
3. To foster inter-community discussion about the current direction of African American literature.
4. To bring a discussion about quality of writing to the black commercial fiction arena.
5. To turn these resultant discussion into an anthology to be published by my new imprint, Niggerati Manor Productions ($39.95 hardcover). Then to come up with a nationwide speaking tour, charging college campuses another $8-12,000 a pop to have a live debate on their campus (think Carl Webber versus Edward P. Jones). Next, I'll spin that off into a reality show on BET where 10 writers live together, struggling to get published, but one team is commercial and the other literary. We'll kick one off each episode, with the tag line "You're a hack!" This show will of course be hosted by LeVar Burton, the winner being published by Niggerati Manor Productions with us retaining the movie rights (because let's face it, it's all about the movie rights). Then it's just sit back, and let the revenue streams pour in.
Sincerely,
Mat Johnson
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16 Comments:
On point as usual.
Cheers,
RBP
"Criticism: I believe that good writing should be nuanced, original, and transcendent.
Response: I believe that you are an asshole."
I'm sorry, bro', but I cannot go on. This has me rolling. I am loving the breakdown, so now I will continue to read, but man!
By the way, I got into such a heated debate with another really intelligent brother about Perry's work, and he could not accept that 'nuanced and intelligent' could be a requirement that I make of work by Black authors/playwrights. Called me elitist, and obviously out of touch, as Perry's work is loved by hundreds of thousands of us, then called me some other names.
After he stepped back off the other names he'd called me, we agreed to disagree.
Do u have my phone tapped? :-) I JUST got off the phone w/ an acquaintance. During most of the conversation I felt a disconnect & had to hold my tongue from blaring, "r we on the same page? what point r u making exactly?" i started the conversation excitedly sharing the fact that i think i've finally found my flow in life and he began to discuss the statistical analysis of how many in this life achieve success. LOL! I can laugh, now. I was frustrated during the call.
so, i appreciate your poignant blog with very pointed and clear criticisms vs. responses! i love these kinds of discussions. i look forward to reading more of your work. recently got my hands on your Hunting in Harlem and can't wait to get into it!
all the best!
By the way, I think you should take the time to understand that just because someone does not agree with you does not mean they don't comprehend what you're saying. I went directly to your blog to try to give you a chance and see was the article from Morehouse accurate. I found out it was. I understand Critical Thinking. Took several classes on it. Hell, I took legal classes just to debate even more. I just don't agree with anything you said...at all. You still have not come to grips with history. You have not admitted that authors of major publishing companies may still need finetuning. You are drawing this great big line between self-published authors in creativity and writers of major publishing companies. Hell, I was hired to do a ghostwriting project FOR a writer who is with a major publishing company, and the whole time I was reading the outline I was thinking "This is what got accepted?!" Each writer should be held responsible for their own work; not their status.
As for Tyler Perry, I couldn't disagree more. His work challenges what Hollywood dodges. There is no other black screenwriter (minus John Singleton) who takes controversial topics in the black community and touches on them dead-on. How many movies do you see where the topic of child abuse, child rape, domestic violence, adoption, fatherhood, motherhood, divorce rates, etc. can all be taken on in ONE movie? He should be invited to these events; he is absolutely the best screenwriter out now (besides John Singleton) for doing what he does.
You have way too much time on your hands to be worrying about what other people do. Why not take the time to perfect your own craft instead of writing these blogs complaining about everybody else? Or, wait...since you're a writer with a major publishing company, do you now have time to do otherwise? I feel like I'm arguing with a frat brother whose pissed about paper members versus those who were hazed. It's almost like you're annoyed that Omar Tyree is more successful than you. Let it go. Move on.
And one last thing, that question at the end about the Real World analysis was very condescending, but then again, that seems to be your style. Not cute. At all.
And before you point out that this sentence "I feel like I'm arguing with a frat brother who's pissed about paper members versus those who were hazed." should have "who's" instead of "whose," I realized that after it was accepted. I guess that proves your point about the poor self-published writers who haven't critiqued their work, eh? Damn, how can I be like you when I grow up? Oh wait, I believe that's me being condescending as well. Picture that.
The most amazing part, of course, is that this poor woman has proven your point exactly. She has not, in any way, refuted your actual points, she has just gone on to state, I believe you're an asshole. Wow.
And who on earth thinks John Singleton has been a good screenwriter in years?! Just becuase a person addresses a social issue doesn't mean it's addressed well. Viagra commercials deal with the pain of male impotence but nobody is going to suggest that the people who write Viagra commercials are somehow "tackling important issues." They are selling a product. That product is only deemed a success if it sells in great volume. This is the definition of the difference between art and commerce.
Tyler is making a ton of money at his low-brow over the top melodrama but to say he is the best screenwriter working today is to ignore the work of John Ridley, Spike Lee, Saladin Patterson, Shonda Rhimes, Elizabeth Hunter, Don Scott,Tina Chism and so on.
Sometimes I don't know why I am trying to write the best novel I can. The time I spend on all these revisions, getting feedback and trying to write while working full time might be for nothing. Maybe I should just write the broadest, dumbest thing I can and sell the movie rights.
Prescriptive Street Lit: Someone comes into the store, she is not really a reader but maybe, kinda wants to be. While I am not likely to recommend commercial or street lit, sometimes it fits-folks who have not read since high school, new adult readers, etc. We carry much less than we used to, but even in the old store I would find myself talking to people who just need to be turning pages. Of course, being kind of subversive, I try to suggest Iceberg Slim>Walter's Easy Rawlins books>The Conjure-Man Dies>Chester Himes. Sneaky bookselling at its best-when dozens of Slapboxing with Jesus went to a high school for "reluctant readers." Get 'em while they are young.
Capcity, Lovemelikethat, Akwaaba!
Bidget- That's some funny stuff. Slapboxing is a great idea for young reluctant readers. Hopefully they will come for the naughty bits, and stay for the prose.
Mat!
I started commenting but it turned out so long that I just put it up as a blog on my page.
MJ
Marlon-
That response is genius. You're right, it's not about lowbrow, it's really about quality- thanks for clarifying that for me, that changes the way I think about this. But as you do with "low-blow," it seems that to discuss forms of poor writing we have to name them something.
Everyone, check out the piece at: http://marlon-james.blogspot.com/2007/03/high-art-low-art-and-critical-thought.html
Mat-I am not sure how many other bookstores do this. You meet folks where they are, then move them along to other authors and titles. When I was younger (and less subtle), my father referred to this as "intellectual imperialism." He is right to a degree--and everyone needs a good weekend read once in a while (I'll take mysteries, thank you). But street lit is brain candy: entertaining and fun for the moment. It may reflect a reader's world (or fantasy), but well-written, original literature has the ability to transform that world…and to endure. Strong literature subconsciously teaches readers the elements of good writing. My hope, as a book person, is that they will develop an insatiable craving for more.
Bridget, I couldn't agree more. Sometimes in the midst of trying to figure out what the hell Toni Morrison was trying with Paradise I have to reach for my Easy Rawlins, or Pellecanos' King Suckerman or even something light and magical from Flora Nwapa. I think we need all these kinds of books for a truly rounded experience. I learned more from Tolstoy than from X-men but when I'm contructing a scene especially a violent one, all those wham! Pow! panels come back. The danger is when readers are only exposed to one kind of book and that is what's happening now. Nobody is learning to appreciate the book with the long payoff, the book that may educate as well as entertain. Nobody seems to be in on the secret that everything you every really need to know about life you can learn from fiction.
perhaps it is true, everything thing you need to know about life can be found in fiction (for me, it's poetry). but sometimes "knowing" is not enough. "knowing" things does not always satisfy us on a human level. sometimes what we need is contact. sometimes we need the most familiar thing, the most common thing to keep us from feeling the chronic alienations of this place called america. and, yes, i agree... a work of great literature can be a transformative experience-
however, all change is not for the better.the larger questions once asked cannot be unasked- the pursuit of answers can drive you mad!
Mat,
I enjoyed this post primarily because it highlights how often we fail to respond adequately in debates. As you note, it comes from never being taught one way or the other how to LISTEN, then respond effectively. I certainly include myself among that number, particularly when in the rage of my youth. I sent the link for this post to my students, precisely because it is so useful.
D. Dickson-Carr
5. To turn these resultant discussion into an anthology to be published by my new imprint, Niggerati Manor Productions ($39.95 hardcover). Then to come up with a nationwide speaking tour, charging college campuses another $8-12,000 a pop to have a live debate on their campus (think Carl Webber versus Edward P. Jones).
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Matt, you are a fcking nut.
I can't believe I just stumbled on your site.
Your shit is underrated and Brilliant like O.C., Ras Kass and host of other emcees that only me and my friends care about.
Speaking of High/Low Brow...
I just posted today on the Tre Ellis/Matty Rich Inkwell beef.
Who knew?
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